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Dialysis Discussion => Dialysis: Humor, Pictures, Stories and Poems => Topic started by: kitkatz on July 25, 2006, 09:21:56 PM

Title: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: kitkatz on July 25, 2006, 09:21:56 PM

Almost an Ode to Angie and her Pee

So our little Angie
Does not pee
Even when she drinks Pepsi!

Teehee!Teehee!

Whama! Whamsa!
For Sandmansa.
He can go pee
When he drink Pepsi.
And he should not tease
Poor little Angie and Me

Bad bad man
That's what you are Sandman!

Sandman, Sandman
Bad little man
You should not pee
all over me
when you drink tea!
Nor should you offer Pepsi
to Angie or me.
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: kitkatz on July 25, 2006, 09:23:34 PM
The art of dialysis is
when a complicated machine
Helps you take a whiz!

Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: angieskidney on July 26, 2006, 01:05:07 AM

Almost an Ode to Angie and her Pee

So our little Angie
Does not pee
Even when she drinks Pepsi!

Teehee!Teehee!

Whama! Whamsa!
For Sandmansa.
He can go pee
When he drink Pepsi.
And he should not tease
Poor little Angie and Me

Bad bad man
That's what you are Sandman!

Sandman, Sandman
Bad little man
You should not pee
all over me
when you drink tea!
Nor should you offer Pepsi
to Angie or me.



Me blushes immensely  :-[ :-[ :-[

That is soooo cool!!!! Thank you :) Hee hee
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: sandman on July 26, 2006, 05:32:17 PM
HA HA HA!!!  That's great.  But honestly, im not that bad, am I?



Post edited by Sandman[SA]
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: goofynina on July 26, 2006, 05:39:35 PM
Oh come on, i dont think that was necessary to post that...  ENOUGH WITH THE GOLDEN SHOWERS PEOPLE...  :(
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: kitkatz on July 26, 2006, 10:18:26 PM
Mea culpa! Goofynina did not mean to offend . Hanging head in shame.

Goofynina had a day
Nothing went her way.
She got online to have her say
And Katherine was there to ruin her day!
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: sandman on July 26, 2006, 10:49:25 PM
I think it was to include something in reference to what I said but later deleted.  ::)  I didn't meen to offend anyone by it.
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: angieskidney on July 27, 2006, 08:27:20 AM
:(


(psst .. I thought it was a great poem!)
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: goofynina on July 27, 2006, 09:05:17 AM
I was not referring to the poem (but since you brought it up)  I was referring to what Sandmansa had put in his post but it has been edited by him,  which by the way is greatly appreciated....
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: angieskidney on July 27, 2006, 09:09:38 AM
I think it was to include something in reference to what I said but later deleted.  ::)  I didn't meen to offend anyone by it.
I was not referring to the poem (but since you brought it up)  I was referring to what Sandmansa had put in his post but it has been edited by him,  which by the way is greatly appreciated....
I thought we weren't supposed to delete posts? I am confused :( (it was something Epoman said before) ... but of course I think I missed what was said by Sandman lol
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: goofynina on July 27, 2006, 09:11:34 AM
I did not say DELETE,  I said Edited.....
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: angieskidney on July 27, 2006, 09:12:58 AM
I did not say DELETE,  I said Edited.....
I was referring to what Sandman said... he did the same thing I did
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: goofynina on July 27, 2006, 09:17:19 AM
He did not delete the whole post, he edited out something he wrote IN the posts which was (what i found) to be offensive
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: angieskidney on July 27, 2006, 09:17:54 AM
He did not delete the whole post, he edited out something he wrote IN the posts which was (what i found) to be offensive
Oh don't get me wrong. I wasn't saying you did anything.
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: goofynina on July 27, 2006, 09:20:13 AM
Quote
I thought we weren't supposed to delete posts? I am confused  (it was something Epoman said before) ... but of course I think I missed what was said by Sandman lol

I was clarifying what you wrote in this post,  no one DELETED anything, it was edited...
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: Bajanne on July 27, 2006, 09:20:32 AM
I thought we weren't supposed to delete posts? I am confused :( (it was something Epoman said before) ... but of course I think I missed what was said by Sandman lol

Let me clarify the position of the message board.  Moderators do not delete posts, but if a moderator finds a post offensive, he can inform the relevant party, and if that person cooperates, he can delete or edit his post himself - which is what seemed to have happened in this case.
If moderators edit, we make it clear what we edited.
I hope this makes it very clear.
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: angieskidney on July 27, 2006, 09:43:58 AM
I thought we weren't supposed to delete posts? I am confused :( (it was something Epoman said before) ... but of course I think I missed what was said by Sandman lol

Let me clarify the position of the message board.  Moderators do not delete posts, but if a moderator finds a post offensive, he can inform the relevant party, and if that person cooperates, he can delete or edit his post himself - which is what seemed to have happened in this case.
If moderators edit, we make it clear what we edited.
I hope this makes it very clear.
Everyone is missing what I was talking about!

Never mind .... I give up ... let's just post a poem..
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: kitkatz on July 27, 2006, 06:07:45 PM
I am so glad it was not me
That got Goofynina so angry.
If I wanted to offend
Then this peom I would end.
So it is with great glee
That I send this message out to thee.


Come on folks the sillier the poem the better!
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: sandman on July 27, 2006, 06:25:18 PM
I admit, something I wrote could have been considered rude or discusting and was why I edited my post.  No one deleted it, "I" myself edited it because I realized that what I said may have been inappropriate.
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: kitkatz on July 27, 2006, 06:28:30 PM
Geez, after all this fuss I wish I had read it!
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: angieskidney on July 27, 2006, 06:43:17 PM
Ya he told me what he said :P Don't worry you didn't miss anything :P Just a disqusting story of something he did for money   ::) lol but I still felt that he shouldn't have edited his post (until he told me what it said lol) because when I edited a post upon people's requests .. I was told by Epoman to never do that because we are allowed to speak our minds.. But ya .. you didn't miss anything ;) lol
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: kitkatz on July 27, 2006, 10:39:37 PM
 >:D >:D >:D >:D ;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: Epoman on July 28, 2006, 12:12:29 AM
Ya he told me what he said :P Don't worry you didn't miss anything :P Just a disqusting story of something he did for money   ::) lol but I still felt that he shouldn't have edited his post (until he told me what it said lol) because when I edited a post upon people's requests .. I was told by Epoman to never do that because we are allowed to speak our minds.. But ya .. you didn't miss anything ;) lol

Yes! DO NOT EDIT your posts just to make another member happy.
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: sandman on July 28, 2006, 07:25:28 PM
Ya he told me what he said :P Don't worry you didn't miss anything :P Just a disgusting story of something he did for money   ::) lol but I still felt that he shouldn't have edited his post (until he told me what it said lol) because when I edited a post upon people's requests .. I was told by Epoman to never do that because we are allowed to speak our minds.. But ya .. you didn't miss anything ;) lol

Yes! DO NOT EDIT your posts just to make another member happy.

Epoman, why are you quoting what Angie said about my editing my own post?  She was not the one that edit it nore did she ask me to.  I felt that what I said was inappropriate so I removed it.  No big deal, really.
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: angieskidney on July 28, 2006, 07:43:47 PM
Ya he told me what he said :P Don't worry you didn't miss anything :P Just a disgusting story of something he did for money   ::) lol but I still felt that he shouldn't have edited his post (until he told me what it said lol) because when I edited a post upon people's requests .. I was told by Epoman to never do that because we are allowed to speak our minds.. But ya .. you didn't miss anything ;) lol

Yes! DO NOT EDIT your posts just to make another member happy.

Epoman, why are you quoting what Angie said about my editing my own post?  She was not the one that edit it nor did she ask me to.  I felt that what I said was inappropriate so I removed it.  No big deal, really.
Because I was making a big deal about how come you had to change your post. No biggie. Anyway, who is gonna post the next poem?
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: sandman on July 28, 2006, 08:08:27 PM
Can they be dirty poems?  I may have a few.  ;)
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: kitkatz on July 28, 2006, 09:28:09 PM
Asking about the next poem
Can be dangerous in your home.
You might be reading some posts
And then whammo some crazy host
Goes and writes a tome.
Is it so hard to write?
Not when you feel so right.

Teehee!  Teehee!
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: angieskidney on July 29, 2006, 04:30:12 AM
sleep sleep
always tired
but sleep I can't keep
The Sandman I must fire.

I am awake
at 3am
My dreams I can't make
The hours I must cram.

Why can't I sleep?
I miss good sleep so I weep.
I daydream of good health
and a good job that brings me wealth.

One day I will be normal
and my bladder will be full
I will have pizza
with lots of mozzarella

I won't feel faint
My blood won't be of taint
and I will have energy
to run and catch a Frisbee!

Be able to walk
in the kidney walk
and feel proud
of all accomplishments all around

Maybe one day
we can say
a transplant is a cure
I am sure

but for now
this is how
we live to say
live day by day

© 2006 A. Essery
----
I know not that good but I wrote it off the top if my head  :-[
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: kitkatz on July 29, 2006, 10:51:05 AM
Pretty good poem there Angie.
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: angieskidney on July 29, 2006, 11:48:51 AM
Pretty good poem there Angie.
Really?? Wow! I rarely get complements lol  :-[
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: sandman on July 29, 2006, 04:14:11 PM
Agreed, that is very well said there Angie.  A poem doesn't have to rhyme, it just has to come from the heart.
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: angieskidney on July 29, 2006, 05:45:12 PM
but it does rhyme ..
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: kitkatz on July 29, 2006, 08:21:02 PM
Too tired to sleep
Over my head
and in way to deep.
I try to slumber in my bed.

I awake with the itchies
To tired to really scratch
It makes me get the bitchies
I wonder if it's chicken pox I catch.

No, it is not the chicken pox
So I wander the house
Checking the locks
Tip toeing quiet as a mouse.

I do not want to wake
The sleeping one.
Two Benadryl I will take
Then hopefully off to sleep I will run.

Sleep, sleep blessed sleep!
I settle back into my bed.
I count millions of sheep.
I see them all in my head.

Soon I am asleep.




Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: angieskidney on July 30, 2006, 10:34:16 AM
Too tired to sleep
Over my head
and in way to deep.
I try to slumber in my bed.

I awake with the itchies
To tired to really scratch
It makes me get the bitchies
I wonder if it's chicken pox I catch.

No, it is not the chicken pox
So I wander the house
Checking the locks
Tip toeing quiet as a mouse.

I do not want to wake
The sleeping one.
Two Benadryl I will take
Then hopefully off to sleep I will run.

Sleep, sleep blessed sleep!
I settle back into my bed.
I count millions of sheep.
I see them all in my head.

Soon I am asleep.


I love that!!! heheh bad itchies ;) Phosphate must be high ;)
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: Hephs-little-lady on August 18, 2006, 02:16:17 PM
I hate dialysis and I'm just the wife,

It sneaks up on you and takes over life!

Now "Boris" he has come to stay,

And Baxter feeds him everyday!  ;)
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: goofynina on August 18, 2006, 02:57:53 PM
Yay,  good one, Hope the Hephman is doing better and you are hanging in there girlfriend,  *taps fingers* just waiting for some pics here... ;)    J/k
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: Hephs-little-lady on August 19, 2006, 12:34:52 AM
If you want pics quick, just take a trip over the pond and help me unpack!  ;D
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: kitkatz on August 19, 2006, 10:05:49 AM
Okay.
*Flaps arms as hard as she can to take off to fly*
Hey this is not working.  Sorry HephLL. I just can't get the plane to work. You will have to unpack yourself.
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: Hephs-little-lady on August 19, 2006, 11:37:24 AM
ROFLMAO  ;D
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: kitkatz on November 15, 2006, 09:30:09 AM
Eeny,meeney, miney moe
Where in the access will the needles go?

I went to dialysis the other day
And wouldn't you know it I lost my way!

The tech came out
I started to pout.

I guess in the long run
I just wanted to have some fun!
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: angieskidney on November 15, 2006, 08:23:59 PM
Eeny,meeney, miney moe
Where in the access will the needles go?

I went to dialysis the other day
And wouldn't you know it I lost my way!

The tech came out
I started to pout.

I guess in the long run
I just wanted to have some fun!
The fistula rolled left
The fistula rolled right

Come on you can stick it
Don't let it win the fight!

Never thought I would win
but now it is finally in

Then my BP drops
I just want to plop

Lay me back so I can faint
Looks like my face is white paint.

Turn off my UF, take me off
When it alarms please don't scoff!

Let me go home to bed
Hurry up. go ahead!

Can't wait til I get a kidney
Then will my machine miss me? :P
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: kitkatz on November 16, 2006, 12:21:52 PM
Cool poem, Angie. Very creative.
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: tubes on December 01, 2006, 06:43:04 PM
A look into the mind of a 16 yr old. 
About to start dialysis.
This is how I saw my family....my LIFE.




 COURAGEOUS


I'm courageous you must believe

through thick in thin I stick it out.

The doctors say you'll tough it out

be strong be willing be a man.

My mother says, "oh he's not ready

dint put pressure on him already".

My dad is a jerk through it all

doesn't give a damn if I fall.

My sister Michelle says like this

he can't have mine or have this.

My sister Sheila doesn't know

what to say or for me to know.

I can say I am not ready

To say the doctors are all ready.
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: meadowlandsnj on December 04, 2006, 02:19:14 PM
I wrote some dialysis haiku a few months ago while on the machine:

dialysis chair
sitting here watching my blood
i need a kidney

drinking dark soda
is something i cannot do
i don't pee it out

oh to pee again
to take lots of potty breaks
sweet release of pee

it ain't shakespeare but..... ;D
Title: Re: Silly Poems about Dialysis
Post by: okarol on May 19, 2008, 02:13:43 PM
IHD

Who do you know
That cheers at the sight
Of a bag full of yellow
And a smile so bright?

Where do you go
When you need help and hugs
Overwhelmed by the challenge
Of dialysis and drugs?

How long do you stay
At the keyboard to see
The friends and the topics
Or is it just me?