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Dialysis Discussion => Dialysis: Humor, Pictures, Stories and Poems => Topic started by: okarol on March 14, 2007, 11:36:50 PM

Title: Touchways poem
Post by: okarol on March 14, 2007, 11:36:50 PM

Touchways
A conduit of emotion
A touch light as a breeze
Yet warm and near
He traced along my smile
A linger, a look
His caress fed my joy
Emotion moving in
Holding me in space
Feeling it for a minute
A lifetime, a touch
So strong, yet soft
He knows what I like.

by okarol

thanks kit

Title: Re: Touchways poem
Post by: kitkatz on March 14, 2007, 11:44:45 PM

Here is mine!  We were collaborating and both came up with a poem!

Touchways to the heart
It builds slowly
Through a lifetime
The touchways that we build
In our bodies
And in our hearts.
Touchways that ignite
The fire
between a man and a woman.
The soothing touches
Of gentle hands that
Remind us we are not alone.
Touchways develop between us.
Touchways always remind us
To be kind
To one another.

Katherine Soto 3/14/07

Title: Re: Touchways poem
Post by: goofynina on March 15, 2007, 09:13:02 PM

WOAH....DEEP MAN, DEEEEEEP, and ohhh so awesome ;)  :2thumbsup;  :clap;

Title: Re: Touchways poem
Post by: Sluff on March 16, 2007, 06:44:27 PM

OUTSTANDING!!!   Poems

Title: Re: Touchways poem
Post by: Bajanne on March 16, 2007, 11:52:18 PM

This is good stuff!!!
I am going to have to stop my laziness, and call on my creative muse...