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Dialysis Discussion => Dialysis: Humor, Pictures, Stories and Poems => Topic started by: kitkatz on March 13, 2007, 10:59:13 PM

Title: Storment Poem
Post by: kitkatz on March 13, 2007, 10:59:13 PM

Storment!
Feeling lost at sea.
Swell surging
White caps curl
The ocean sways.
Swirling currents swish me around
Pounding roaring surf
Roars inland.
Tearing for shore
Waves part
And dance upon the rock
That sits in the water.
Still and calm.
Waves pound on it.
I ride the surf for all I am worth
Grabbing the rocky precipice
As the selfish waves
attack my feet again.
Tugging on me
trying to reclaim me.
Breathe in, breathe out
I catch my raspy breath
Respite in a sea of tumult.

Co written By Kitkatz and Okarol
Written 3/12/07

Title: Re: Storment Poem
Post by: kitkatz on March 13, 2007, 11:20:11 PM

Heads Up! Incoming!
There is one,
A pretty rock.
Pick it up.
Throw it
As hard as you can!
God doesn’t mind
If you throw rocks at him.
As long as you throw
The pretty ones.

I tie my anxiety to a pretty rock
And heave it towards heaven.
I hope the angels duck
As it flies through the air
Towards its destination.
My prayers.

I throw my prayers
as rocks towards heaven.
Heavy and laden with troubles.
Maybe God builds things
With my rocks.
I have sent enough of them.

Heads up heaven
Incoming!

by kitkatz 3/13/07

Title: Re: Storment Poem
Post by: Joe Paul on March 14, 2007, 12:26:26 AM

Man, these are great!

Title: Re: Storment Poem
Post by: Sluff on March 14, 2007, 04:37:19 AM

Nice poems Kit.
 :thumbup;

Title: Re: Storment Poem
Post by: Ohio Buckeye on March 14, 2007, 07:24:20 PM

Those are really great............and so true.
Thanks for sharing them with us.

Title: Re: Storment Poem
Post by: susie q on March 15, 2007, 07:38:08 AM

 :2thumbsup; :clap;

Title: Re: Storment Poem
Post by: kelliOR on March 15, 2007, 10:25:51 AM

kitkatz,  your poetry is wonderful!

Title: Re: Storment Poem
Post by: jbeany on March 17, 2007, 10:06:43 PM

You have a lovely way with words, kit.

Title: Re: Storment Poem
Post by: Bajanne on March 18, 2007, 11:30:43 PM

Tremendous poems, Kitkatz.
I was watching a video about the life of Jesus this evening, and there was the part about when He was in the boat and there was a storm.  Then I went to bed and dreamt I was in a boat, and you guessed it! there was a storm.  I just wake, come to IHD, check out this  poem and here I am, in a storm on sea again.
Just thankful that Jesus is in my boat!