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Dialysis Discussion => Dialysis: Humor, Pictures, Stories and Poems => Topic started by: derrickkess on February 25, 2007, 08:09:38 PM

Title: Rate my poem
Post by: derrickkess on February 25, 2007, 08:09:38 PM
Please go to www.poetry.com and read my poem LIVE LIFE BIG and rate my poem. And let me know what you think of my poetry,regards and thanks Derrick Kess
Title: Re: Rate my poem
Post by: Sluff on February 25, 2007, 08:56:18 PM
Quote from: derrickkess on February 25, 2007, 08:09:38 PM
Please go to www.poetry.com and read my poem LIVE LIFE BIG and rate my poem. And let me know what you think of my poetry,regards and thanks Derrick Kess

Derrick maybe you could copy and paste your poem here rather than linking  to poetry.com. Can't find your poem.
Title: Re: Rate my poem
Post by: jbeany on February 25, 2007, 09:51:00 PM
Live Life Big
I want to live everyday to the fullest
as I watch the nurse hook me up
to the dialysis machine
life seems fleeting
but yet I endure under the beating of my disease
life is beautiful and not to be missed
to short to fast I know I'm not going to last
time not to waste life meant to live
I want life to be full and happy and gay
I want to enjoy
because you never know
when it's going to be your day.
LIVE LIFE BIG

Derrick J Kess


If you want to find it on the site, sluff, you have to type his name in the search boxes.
Title: Re: Rate my poem
Post by: anja on February 28, 2007, 10:43:58 PM
Derrick, your poem is so full of positive emotion, how could anyone not enjoy it!  Keep up the good vibes and it will serve you well ,especially in your time of need, as we all endure at one time or another~  Thanks for sharing and congrats.  :2thumbsup;