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Dialysis Discussion => Dialysis: Humor, Pictures, Stories and Poems => Topic started by: kitkatz on February 18, 2007, 11:20:30 PM

Title: My Love Poem
Post by: kitkatz on February 18, 2007, 11:20:30 PM

He loves me beautiful
I look in the mirror
What do I see?
I see me
A middle-aged woman.
Blonde, blue eyed.
Scars running up and down
And all around.
In my eyes the beauty is gone.
There is a woman left standing
There in that mirror.
A strong, tough woman.
But when I am in his arms
He loves me beautiful.
He kisses the scars
And the places that have been hurt.
He makes me believe
Once again
I am beautiful.
He sees inside me
Past my hurts.
He reaches past the defenses.
He sees me through love’s eyes.
He loves me beautiful.

BY Katherine S. (AKA kitkatz) copyright 2/17/07 10:44p.m.
Posted on Renal Romance.com. Check it out!

Title: Re: My Love Poem
Post by: okarol on February 18, 2007, 11:23:44 PM

That's true love Kit.
Great poem.  :thumbup;

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Post by: vandie on February 19, 2007, 08:53:25 AM

That made me cry.  Beautiful poetry Kit.

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Post by: Ohio Buckeye on February 19, 2007, 09:34:49 AM

That is beautiful Kitkatz.

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Post by: anja on February 19, 2007, 10:02:57 PM

Awwww, how touching!  You express your shared love so wonderfully!    :cuddle;

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Post by: Sluff on February 20, 2007, 04:34:48 AM

Very true deep heartfelt poem Kitkatz.  Seriously deep. I'm so glad you and Victor have eachother.

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Post by: Bajanne on February 22, 2007, 04:38:11 PM

That is so special.  Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem with us.

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Post by: glitter on February 22, 2007, 08:59:06 PM

wow-I dont even like poetry very much-but that one I do like-very nice!! :thumbup;

Title: Re: My Love Poem
Post by: kimcanada on February 25, 2007, 12:03:11 PM

What a beautiful poem

 :thx; for sharing it with us, it sure hit home with me

Kim