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Dialysis Discussion => Dialysis: Humor, Pictures, Stories and Poems => Topic started by: gkcoley on August 26, 2011, 10:14:51 PM

Title: Poem i wrote
Post by: gkcoley on August 26, 2011, 10:14:51 PM

It's an older poem from a few weeks ago a most definately not my best but its the only one that applies medically lol, let me know what you all think  :guitar:

Bruised and Scarred

For years I've lived at the point of a knife.
So many times I've been within an inch of my life.
Felt like a hero and a rat.
Something wrong and back at bat.
Now I am bruised and scarred.
All the blades and souls with which I've sparred.
So much I've endured in this life.
Standing on the edge of a knife.
My body has been cut and sewed.
My mind is whole and my soul will never corrode.

Title: Re: Poem i wrote
Post by: YLGuy on August 26, 2011, 10:28:25 PM

 :2thumbsup; I like it.

Title: Re: Poem i wrote
Post by: monrein on August 27, 2011, 04:49:39 AM

 :2thumbsup;

Title: Re: Poem i wrote
Post by: Bajanne on August 27, 2011, 07:39:24 AM

Great poem!   Great spirit! :thumbup;

Title: Re: Poem i wrote
Post by: willowtreewren on August 27, 2011, 10:26:44 AM

 :thumbup; :thumbup;

Two thumbs up!

Aleta

Title: Re: Poem i wrote
Post by: boswife on August 27, 2011, 12:48:10 PM

 :2thumbsup; 

Title: Re: Poem i wrote
Post by: thegrammalady on August 27, 2011, 02:38:45 PM

so true, so true.